美国大学申请activity填写范例

『壹』 美国大学申请essay书写指南

现如今，很多学生选择去美国读大学，那么文书材料的准备也很关键，其中有一项留学申请essay，想必大家还不是很了解。下面随我一起来看看以下的内容。

首先来看看essay的书写步骤。

1. 早作准备

这不是一般的家庭作业或学校项目，而有可能是你人生的转折点。一份得体的essay能帮你进入著名学府并改变你的生活。

早做准备指的是，你需要在学校申请截止日前至少三个月开始写essay。只有这样你才有机会更改主题，修改essay，反复阅读，让别人进行评价和精心选择每一个单词。

对于那些申请了多家大学的学生，有些大学可能需要补充essay，这需要你花费大量的时间。此外，全世界很多高中高年级学生都会被各种压力所压垮，包括毕业考试，所以早早准备essay会让你具备优势。

2.多打几次草稿，多尝试几个主题

大多数成功的申请人都是打好几个草稿然后选出最喜欢的那份蔽伏和。这个道理相当于在从事一件工作时，例如一项新的体育项目，要求你投入大量练习时间，直到你进步到足以开始比赛。

写essay同样如此。对于大多数外国学生，这是他们第一次严肃地写一篇文章，更别说用外语写了。开头几个草稿将非常困难，你要坚持写下去，直到你的essay完美无瑕。

记住，每份草稿不一定都要围绕同一个主题。如果某个主题比较好的话，你可以围绕它准备两三份essay，或者必要时更换主题。

3.寻找一个你信赖的人校对每一份essay

这能让你发现你的essay里可能的错误。强烈建议你找一个在英语写作方面非常有经验的人来帮你完成这项工作，并且—最重要的是—真心愿意帮你的人。

校对者必须是对于申请过程了解十分深入的人，例如美国大学学生或者现役或前任大学招生官，或者是有多年英语写作经验的教育工作者。

一旦他们指出有些东西你需要修改，无论是关于essay的内容还是主题的，你需要立即修改或重写。如果得到了他们的肯定，那么你就可以提交了。

4. 阅读成厅敏功的essay范例

这并不是鼓励你直接把别人的点子拿过来。但是，阅读成功申请人的essay可以让你了解大学招生官需要的信息是什么。

小A在开始她的个人陈述之前，为找不到能给招生官留下深刻印象的东西感动非常苦恼。当她通过谷歌读到一些成功进入常春藤大学的学生写的essay时–她了解到这些学生主要是基于非常简单的个人趣事展示出了自己独特的性格。

之后小A选择了一个简单而又意义的主题：照顾她卧病在床的父亲。小A的essay非常感人，几位招生负责人甚至手写了回信表扬她并邀请她进入华盛顿与李大学。

5. 遵从故事的结构

作为作者，你要记住，高质量的essay建立在一般性的故事结构上，诸如情节的发展、高潮和结局。

大学申请essay当然不需要像动作电影那样，但也必须使读者经历好奇、惊叹和满足三个阶段。此外，还需要保证读者被牢牢吸引而不被一些不重要的细节或繁冗内容分心。

最好的办法是，把可能让整个故事显得混沌的句子或场景去掉。记住，每个招生官都要看海量的essay，所以你的故事如果引人入胜，那你就能脱颖而出。

接着来看看书写技巧都有哪些。

言简意赅，避免啰啰嗦嗦。

每一个句子都应该精简到只保留它的基本部分。任何冗余或者不能增加新意的词语都应该删除。当你把文章精简并删掉不必要的词和短语时，文章的质量就得到了提高。要知道，招生委员会在审核期间，要短时间内面对宏盯那么多essay，他是没有时间来看啰啰嗦嗦，没有主次的文章的。

表述要精确。

任何时候都要尽可能详尽而又具体。细节能让你的作品更具真实性。对于要表述的内容，想要表达的思想要精确的表达出来，感染到读者，让读者信服，从而体现文章的真实性。

主题要明确。

申请的时候，学校给出的essay题目都是有很强的针对性的，所以，在撰写essay之前一定要想清楚这个题目的隐含意义，了解学校想通过这篇文章考察你什么。然后在动笔，这样写出来的文章才有针对性，而不会偏离目标。有的时候题目显得很简单，但是事实上这类题目是最不好写的，因为简单的一句话让人很难摸清楚他们的出题思路和意图，对这类的题目反而要更加注意。

各篇essay之间要相辅相成。

一般来讲，每所学校会要求3-5篇essay，每篇essay考察的目的是不同的，因此，在动笔之前要想好写作的思路和结构。在一篇文章中已体现的重点就不要在另一篇文章中出现，否则几篇文章写下来却只反映了一个特点，很多优势没有展示出来，这样，录取委员会就不会看到一个完整优异的你，从而不能决定是否录取你。

保持同一风格和语调。

在开始动笔之前，你就要决定好采用怎样的风格和语调，并在整篇短文中一以贯之。如果你在短文开头部分的语调是轻松和幽默的，就不要突然在短文中间转变为忧郁或者严厉的语调。如果你打算把自己的短文写成是个人日记风格的，就不要突然开始向局外的读者吹嘘自己。

多修改。

无论是本科还是商学院对essay一般都有字数上的限制，如此多的内容要归纳到那么少的文字中，如何能把每句话都说到点子上，让每个字都发挥其作用还是有一定难度的。当一篇文章写好之后，一定要回头仔细阅读，认真推敲每个句子，同时也可以给自己的朋友和家人看，让他们也多提提意见。一篇好的文章是需要反复多次修改才能“完美”呈现出来的。

最后给大家带来一篇范文赏析。

Cornell—Pose a question that you wish that we had asked you and answer it. Heather posed the question： Tell about an activity that is particularly meaningful to you.

Yale—Please write an essay about an activity or interest that has been particularly meaningful to you.

Early on a June afternoon， I stood in the arena at Willows Farm. I was about to take my very first horse-riding lesson. I was excited， yet incredibly fearful at the same time. I&apos&aposd never actually ridden a horse by myself. Being led around on one of ponies at the fair didn&apos&apost count. I tried talking to myself. ＂What did/have to fear？ After all， it certainly looked easy.＂ I waited white one of the older girls finished in the arena. I&apos&aposd never seen such a big horse， and each time as they went around， the horse looked bigger and bigger.

When my lesson was finally ready to start， Aggie， my teacher， brought out a small pony named Kissy. She was so cute and little， I breathed a sigh of reli. I was convinced that I could handle the situation. ＂No problem，＂ I thought， ＂I&apos&aposll be off to the races in no time.＂

That lesson began with the basics. First I had to learn to put on the bridle and saddle. Then I had to learn to get on and off. That proved to be a challenge， but by the time the lesson finished， I was allowed to ＂ride＂ Kissy by walking around in a circle a few times. Sitting there looking down， I knew I was As John Irving once said， ＂There is something in bestriding a fine horse that makes a man （or woman） feel more than mortal＂.

Little did my parents know that one lesson would turn into an obsession. I spent all day out at the bam. I&apos&aposd probably have stayed the night if my parents had allowed it. I did everything that I could do to learn - I cleaned stalls， walked horses， brushed horses， and fed some twice just to spend a few extra minutes out there. Over the next two years I attended local horse camps and watched others to see if they knew something that I could apply to my riding.

Eventually，I outgrew Kissy and my first trainer. The next step was to move up with the more advanced riders and to Sherry， the next trainer at the barn. Most of the more advanced

：rs owned their own horses. Switching trainers was the easy part. Convincing my parents buy me a horse proved to be slightly more difficult.

Aggie talked to them and told them how much I wanted a horse. Sherry talked to them， and told them how much I needed a horse. Nothing seemed to work. Over the dinner table， the conversation kept coming back to how much money was involved in buying and keeping a horse， but I didn&apos&apost give up. I kept asking. ＂A horse＂ was first on my Christmas list， first on my birthday list， and everything in between.

In the spring， a cute little quarter horse named Cat came into the barn. He was there to be sold， hopully to someone in the barn. He was a good mover and seemed to have a sweet personality. The first time I saw him. I bonded. I had to have this horse. There was just one small problem， my parents were still saying no. Aggie seemed to want me to have a horse as much as I wanted it. She even offered to cut my parents a deal on the board. Every time my mother came to pick me up. I was brushing， walking， or doing something for Cal. I&apos&aposd ask her to hold and talk to him for a few minutes while I got ＂something ready＂ bore I put him away. I could feel my mother melting. Finally one evening I heard the wonderful words. My parents agreed to purchase Cal. I had my very own horse. I was thrilled， and went to work with a brush and comb to make him look as good as he made me feel.

As much as I thought differently， I wasn&apos&apost quite prepared for the enormous responsibility of actually owning a horse. There was feeding， grooming， daily exercise， and stall cleaning to worry about. Becoming a good hunter-jumper meant spending long hours out at the barn. Getting good grades in school meant putting in long hours for homework. I had to learn to balance both. To get it all done， it was mandatory that I become organized and learn to focus on what I was doing in order to make the most of my time spent.

Riding has also presented a means of learning other valuable lessons. Foremost has been accepting responsibility. Owning Cal has meant that I&apos&aposve had the care of a living， breathing animal that depended on me. I couldn&apos&apost take a day off， even if I felt that I had something better to do. Dedication to the sport of riding has also been a learned skill. After the hardest fall or a bad day when nothing seemed to go right， I sometimes wanted to quit right on the spot. That was when I had to get myself back on track and do it again until I got it right. Those same lessons have carried over to school. If I&apos&aposve gotten less than u perfect grade on something or have found something difficult to understand. I&apos&aposve learned that I can&apos&apost just throw in the towel or blame it on the teacher. My ecation has become my responsibility， and I have had to go back and try twice as hard to prove to myself that I can do if.

In my ten years of riding and competing， I have never grown tired of it. I still have my little horse. We have competed and won at many horse shows， and we&apos&aposve grown to love and trust each other. My trainer often rerred to him as my best friend， and I&apos&aposve come to think of him that way too. Sometimes it is fun to lie in bed at night and look at the ribbons hanging on my wall. I know that every day that passes now brings me closer to the ＂someday＂ when it will come to an end. When it does，I will have the memories of the great times I&apos&aposve had and the lessons that I&apos&aposve learned， but most of all. I will have the memory of a little horse with a big heart named Cal.

『贰』 如何填写ca里的activity

网申表格变化较多，比如：活动清单（Activity List）的描述字数从旧版的100字符增加到新版的150个字符，学生有更多的空间来展示他们的细节和成就。

新CA的备选版本（Alternative Versions）将没有限制，除了文书，学生可以无限次的修改网申（旧版本只限于10次）；学生最多可以提交三个不同的文书版本。而且新CA将只接受网上在线申请，不 再接受打印CA表格并寄送纸板申请表格给学校等等新规。

写作部分更新

更新五个文书题目，新的文书题目设计更鼓励和要求学生在写作时的反思和内省，且字数将严格控制在250-650字之间。 小文书（Short answer）将不再出现在拦坦主表里，而是每所学校自己选择是否要 放在自己的附加申请（supplement）里面。

School Form部分更新

学生提供成绩报告，提到自己排名时，要说明学校或年级总学生人数，由高中班主任填写，只能填写一次, 不得修改。增加新的简散桐非学术性评价，可以由申请者的同学、朋友或其他人提交，但是否需要这 份材料由掘兆学生申请的院校决定。

网申付费方式更新

新Common APP的付款方式有变化：不再接受邮寄支票。针对国际学生，如果没有美国信用卡和账户，可以通过Sallie Mae提供一个新的在线支付方式付款。

『叁』 美国留学申请个人陈述优秀范文

美国的留学申请，申请材料是很重要的一项，那么如何写好个人陈述呢，个人陈述作为一个申请学校槐指认识你的材料，应该要好好写的，下面和我一起来看看美国留学申请个人陈述优秀范文。

申请专业：金融工程

在我看来金融工程是一种创新、创造技术，一种对金融工具、金融手段和系统的创造和创新技术，一种平衡收益和风险的技术.它包含了数学,计算机,金融方面的知识,是一门充满了趣味的交叉学科,而数学知识和数学模型是这个学科中必不可少的核心内容：马科维茨的投资组合选择理论姿唤，夏普的资本资产定价模型，Black-Scholes的期权定价模型以及考克斯等人的“二项式”模型正是这种核心地位的体现。

In my opinion, the Financial Engineering is a kind of creative technology to the Financial Instruments, Financial Means and system. It used to balance the benefits and venture as an interesting interdisciplinary subject. It covers many fields such as mathematics, computer science and finance, in which the mathematics and mathematical modeling are the two main aspects of the Financial Engineering. The Investment Portfolio Theory of Markowitz, the capital asset pricing model of the Sharp, Option Pricing Model of Black-Scholes and “Binomial” model of Cox can best reflect the critical position of the two subjects.

我有幸选择了数学与应用数学这个专业，在三年和它的接触了解中，使我对数学，尤其对数学建模有了较深的理解和体会。(记得第一次去听清华大学XX系姜启源教授的讲座,他在讲座上举了一个“现实生活中的数学”例子：“1公斤面, 1公斤馅, 包100个饺子;若馅比 1公斤多, 应多包几个, 还是少包几个呢? ” 是这个生动、形象、富于生活气息的包饺子问题把我领进了数学建模的世界。)

I am glad to choose mathematics and applied mathematics. Three years’ study had deepened my understanding of them, especially of mathematical modeling. (It still occurs to me when I went to attend the class of XX department given by Professor Jiang qiyuan in Tsinghua University for the first time. “1 kilogram of flour added with 1 kilogram of stuffing can make 100 mplings, but what if the stuffing is more than 1 kilogram?” He used a very simple, vivid and interesting example which aroused my interest and led me into the mathematical modeling world.

第一次和数学建模亲密接触是在05年的暑假，我有幸参加了学校组织的数学建模培训。经验丰富的数学老师们通过实实在迹明凯在的例子告诉我们什么是数学建模。给我印象最深的是一个关于SARS的例子：2003年，SARS爆发并在世界范围内传播，严重影响到我国经济发展和人民生活，定量的研究SARS的传播规律并建立数学模型预测和控制传染病蔓延成为数学工作者必须解决的问题……于是Logistic回归便成为我永恒的记忆。为期2周的数学建模培训，给我留下的不仅是一个个经典的数学模型，更重要的是一份澎湃的激情和一份冷静的思考：数学和数学建模是人类的守护神，因为有了她的存在，人类的生存和发展才有条不紊的继续着;那么当SARS病毒肆无忌惮时，当AIDS病毒肆意侵蚀人们肉体时，一个热爱数学、热爱数学建模，更加热爱生命的人能够做些什么?

The first time I kissed the mathematical modeling was in the summer vacation of 2005, when I got a good opportunity to attend the mathematical modeling training organized by our school. Seasoned mathematics teachers told me what on earth the mathematical modeling is through some existing examples, in which the one about SARS impressed me most. In 2003, SARS broke out and shrouded rapidly to the whole world, which imperiled our economic development and people’s living. Therefore, study on its spreading regularity and building the mathematical modeling for predicting and controlling its extension had become the “Archimedes Heels” for all mathematicians… So, the Logistic regression has been carved in my memory. Two weeks’ training has presented me with a kind of passion and calm thinking much more than just those classical mathematical models. As the patron saint of our human-beings, the existence of Mathematics and mathematical modeling are maintaining our subsistence and development. Then, when SARS ran riot, when we are suffering from the pain of AIDS, what can I do as a mathematics and mathematical modeling lover who loves life so much?

怀着这份激情和思考，在大二的秋天，我第一次尝试了运用数学建模的知识去解决实际问题，我和另外两名队员代表学校参加了全国大学生数学建模比赛。比赛要求结合数据对长江水质做出定量评价，分析各地区的水质污染;并对未来长江水质污染发展趋势做出预测分析，制定污水处理计划。长达17页的数据和多个评价指标对我们来说着实是个挑战!究竟应该选择哪些数据?怎样综合考虑多个指标?我们尝试了近一天，推翻了以前建立的种种模型，有好几次都被弄得想要放弃，是队友间的相互鼓励的力量和锲而不舍的精神让我们最终找到了自己满意的模型：综合指数法模型评价长江水质，既体现水质的各种评价因子，又能反映主要污染物对水质的突出作用;通过多元线性回归拟合预测未来水质污染，建立线性优化模型，制定污水处理计划。我们小组的参赛论文获北京市二等奖。三天三夜的建模经历，那份澎湃的激情已经渐渐平息，取而代之的是更加冷静的思考：数学建模创造、创新，成功地解决问题依赖于扎实的数学基础知识和过硬的数学建模能力;依赖于不拘一格的创新思维和创造能力;还依赖于对多方面知识的了解和积累。

Pocketed with this passion and thinking, I tasted to use mathematical modeling into practice and solve the practical problems by attending the National College Mathematical Modeling Contest with the other two schoolmates on behalf of our college. It required us to evaluate the water quality of Changjiang River according to the data, through which we had to analyze the water pollution in every region and predict the trend of it in the future. Finally we had to bring out the plan against it. It was really a challenge for us towards flood of data and estimations as long as 17 pages. We tried almost a whole day only to filter those data and take the evaluations into comprehensive account. Pulling down various models we had built before, we were so defeated that we wanted to give up many times. However, we finally found the satisfactory model thanks to our encouragement to each other which armed us with full strength to go further.We managed to evaluate the water quality by Composite index model, which could not only represent the evaluation factors, but also reflect the main impacts of the contaminations to the water pollution. We predicted the future water pollution through multiple linear regressions fitting and brought out the plan against it by building linear optimization model. Finally, we got the second prize in Beijing for our thesis. Three days’ and nights’ modeling experience had cooled our passion and gave us even more calm thinking instead. The creation of the mathematical modeling, along with the successful solution to the problems through it lied on the solid mathematics foundation, strong modeling ability, accumulation of the knowledge on different fields, unique creative ideas and creativity.

参加数学建模比赛的经历更加激发起我的学习兴趣，使我在学习数学理论的同时更加注重它们的应用性。除此之外，我抓住一切可能的机会再次参加实际的数学建模。大三的上学期，我有幸参加了为期3天的电工数学建模实习：给某大型运动会比赛项目排序。由于对图论知识很熟悉，我很快将问题转化为寻找最佳Hamilton回路。接近87亿种不同的排序的数据量，比上次的全国数模竞赛更大，我的算法运行时间相当长而且运行的结果也很不理想。这种情况的发生不仅仅没有打消我的积极性,反而使我的情绪高涨,这是人生中难得的自我考验,自我提高的机会!通过查询资料改用遗传算法，运行时间和结果都大大提高.最后成功地完成这次实习.这次实习给我的感触很大，一个数学模型是否能够完美地解决实际问题还要考虑其运算成本，实际问题不仅需要一个成功的模型还需要一个快速有效的算法。

The experience from this contest further aroused my interest in mathematics. I began to pay more attention to its application as well as learning the theories. In addition, I tried to catch every opportunity to take part in the practical mathematical modeling. My efforts finally rewarded when I was in the first term as a junior. I had a chance to participate in the 3-day electrician mathematical modeling practice-----classifying the sports programs for a big sports meeting. Being familiar with the Graph Theory, I immediately found the way to solve the problems by seeking the best Hamilton circuit line. Facing the nearly 8.7 billion data files with different orders much more than that on the National Mathematical Modeling Contest, I spent a long time on Algorithm without any perfect result. I wasn’t defeated towards this case, but so excited instead that I could have such a chance to challenge and improve myself. Looking up dozens of files, I finally made a perfect end of the practice by using the Genetic Algorithm into full account. It needs both a successful model and an effective arithmetic to solve these problems. , which largely shortened the operation time and improved the operation result. I learnt a lot from this practice. I came to know that to build successful mathematics modeling that can effectively solve the practical problems, we must take the operation cost

电工数模实习结束后，浓厚的学习兴趣和电工数学实习的教训促使我和数学系、计算机系几名同学共同筹划并创建“数学建模沙龙”，将计算机算法和数学模型共同作为沙龙的主题。每周二下午，我们会组织有兴趣的同学一起，以传授经验、分享心得、共同思考、共同讨论的方法学习和交流数学思想和算法。传统的运输问题、储存问题和新兴的模拟退火算法、蚂蚁算法都曾成为我们的讨论话题。通过这个活动我从数学系和计算机系的同学身上分享了更多的知识,他们的思维方式,处理问题的方法!到目前为止这个活动仍然在进行着,参加的人数也越来越多.带动了学校的一个学习热潮,我为此感到非常的兴奋!

Summarizing my failures in the mathematical modeling electrician practice and proceeding from my interest in this field, I began to think of collaborating on the “Mathematical Modeling Saloon” with several students from mathematics and computer departments, taking the Computer Algorithms and mathematical modeling as the two themes of the book. Every Tuesday afternoon, we would organized those students interested in this field to study and exchange the ideas and arithmetic by imparting experience, sharing what we learnt, pondering together and discussing with each other. Both the traditional transportation & storage problems and the modern Stimulated Annealing Arithmetic (SAA), Ant Algorithm have ever been the topic of our discussion, from which I have learnt many thinking styles and methods to the problems from the students both in mathematics and computer department. So far, I am excited to see that this activity is still in the wind with more and more participants and it aroused a learning upsurge in our college.

在老师的推荐下，大三暑假，我参加了邢永丽老师的教学改革项目——“提高数学课堂教学质量”的结果分析。04-05年，邢老师在她和其他几个数学老师的任课班级上做了课堂互动的教学实践，其数据大多以调查问卷等文字形式出现。此模型的特点让我马上联想到模糊数学定量分析模型，但敢于尝试新模型的念头让我最后选择了AHP层次分析法。通过量化数据，应用AHP层次分析法定量分析老师的综合素质、授课技巧等因素在师生互动、提高数学课堂教学质量中所起的作用，得出教师的授课技巧和课堂问题设置在课堂互动中所占分量最重的结论，并和邢老师合作完成《层次分析法在课堂互动教学效果评价中的应用》论文，邢老师和我对论文都非常满意，已向多个期刊投稿并有望发表。

Recommended by my teacher, I have participated in the Teaching Reform Program of Mrs. Xing yongli----the results analysis of “Improving the mathematics teaching quality on class”. Mrs. Xing, along with some other mathematics teachers experienced the class mutual activities in 2004 to 2005 with the character data files in form of paper investigations. For this style of data files, I finally used the Analytic Hierarchy Process (AHP) as a creative challenge instead of the fuzzy mathematical quantitative analysis models, which firstly knocked my mind. By quantitating data and using the AHP, I succeeded in analyzing how the overall quality of the teachers and their teaching skills work in improving the mathematics teaching quality on class, from which we got the conclusion that the teaching skills and the way to put forward questions on class play the most important role in the class mutual activities. Besides, Mrs. Xing collaborated with me on the thesis named “The Application of Analytic Hierarchy Processinto the Evaluation of Class Mutual Activities”. Both of us were satisfied with this thesis and contributed it to many presses to be published.

和数学建模一样，金融工程的灵魂是创新思维和创造能力，而数学和数学建模知识在金融工程的应用更让我对这门学科充满了兴趣;更s重要的是，金融工程技术能给人们的生活、社会的稳定、国家的发展做出重要贡献，我想这个也更加符合我学习数学建模的初衷。

Similar with the mathematical modeling, the soul of the Financial Engineering is also the creativity. Therefore, the perfect application of the mathematics and mathematical modeling into the Financial Engineering once more surged my enthusiasm in this field. Furthermore, the Financial Engineering plays the important part in people’s living, social stability and the national development, which is my original intention to choose this field I think.

『肆』 美国留学申请书内容参考范文

随着人们受教育程度的不断提高，我们在工作或生活中经常要写各种各样的申请书。写申请书的目的是表达自己的合理诉求。如何书写申请书才能达到效果呢？有请驻留片刻，我们为你推荐美国留学申请书范文，仅供参考,欢迎大家阅读本文。

美国留学申请书范文【篇1】

在原签证已到期的情况下，如为继续在美国参加原定的学习或工作项目提交新的签证申请，可能不必接受另一轮VisaMantis审查，但如有必要，领事官员可在审理签证申请的过程中酌情要求进行VisaMantis审查。

美国留学申请书内容参考以下几点：

一、学术背景

对普通的学生来说，要想顺利的入学，就需要确保自己的学术能力符合要求，这里要出示的证明，就是大家的课程表，需要证明自己有相关课程的学习经历，并且有不错表现。

当然本专业或者相关专业的直升，会更有助于大家的申请，因为有着更高的重合部分，大家要做的就是在学习之外，多积累一些专业相关的实习或者时间的。

二、学历成绩

目前硕士阶段的入学，只针对本科学历以上的学生开放申请，所以大家需要保证自己在国内顺利的完成了学业，并且能够直接出示官方发放的证书，这样才算是有了合格的资格。

而成绩的考核，则主要就是大家的平均成绩，这是大家在完成了考核之后，直接拿到了成绩的平均数，目前申请美国的硕士，必须要确认自己的GpA有3.5分以上。

三、语言能力

英语是这里的授课语言和生活用语，大家在进行准备的时候，语言的能力提升是一个很重要的方面，英语虽然是大家一直在学的技能，但是要想顺利的通过考核，还是需要额外培训的。

可以选择的标准化考试就是雅思和托福，考核的要求和大家的准备基本上是差不多的，要确认好自己对内容和模式有足够的了解，才可以拿到IELTS6.5或者TOEFL90分以上的合格证明。

四、软件文书

美国的各大高校，对学生的考核都是会比较严格的，大家申请除了要满足硬件的要求，还需要展示出自己综合能力中的软实力，要和其他人有不同的地方，才能够吸引审核官。

这里主要的载体，就是大家准备和书写的文书材料，包括基础的CV、pS，以及推荐信和作品集，这些有自己书写的文书，可以直接展示自己的优势，当然大家比需要言之有物，内容能够有说服力。

美国留学申请书范文【篇2】

可以说，“认识自己”就是美国大学申请的精髓所在，让申请者在进入大学之前，对自己的成长经历有个清晰的认识，对自己的专长有个清楚的梳理，对未来有一个初步的规划。

1.写大事记：逐年整理以往的经历，搜集成长中的重要经历。

2.整理荣誉和奖状：荣誉和奖状是个人成就的肯定。

3.回顾特殊时刻：自己最尴尬、最伤心、最自豪、最…的时期。

4.阅读文字记录：日记、作文本、笔记中，也许有你精彩的成长片段。

5.翻阅相册：图像能直观地勾起以往的回忆。

6.和老师聊天：找有洞察力、了解你自己的老师谈一下教育话题。

7.采访熟人：问家人、朋友、同学对你的印象和评价。

8.随时记录：带一个小本，或者利用手机上的便签软件，随时记录自己的心得并经常去回顾和思考，你会发现，思想的种子在发芽，过去的经历在复苏。

9.与目标学校的在校生聊天：如能和未来的校友聊天，对学校和申请都会有个直接的了解。

10.访问目标院校网站：学校的新闻、校报、校史和专业设置都是个信息源，可能激发你的灵感。

美国本科留学文书写作要求如下：

1.对文字的要求：articulate， clear， concise，thoughtful，meaningful， creative

2.对主题的要求：failure， achievement， activity，experience，culture， life， event， story， background， disappointment， challenge，value，change， influence， pursuit， passion， proud development， contribution

3.获取素材的建议：reflect， meditation， define，review

4.叙述方式的要求：elaborate， describe， tell， explain

美国留学申请书范文【篇3】

一、填写好入学申请表(ApplicationForm)

在与美国学校取得联系后，学校便会寄来入学申请表、表、财力证明表等表格。申请人必须仔细填写好这些表格。嘉华世达美国留学专家指出，申请表分为纸质和电子版两种，绝大多数院校建议学生进行在线申请，既节省时间，还能在线查看申请状态。现在绝大多数院校均向申请者收取申请费，金额由30至150美元不等，一般可通过在线提交申请表时用信用卡支付，既快捷也能节省手续费。或者也可以到中国银行办理汇票，但会产生额外的手续费用。

二、推荐信(RecommendationLetter)

推荐信是必须的美国留学申请材料之一。推荐信是由申请人以前的老师或单位领导来写，目的是推荐申请人入学和申请奖学金。推荐信是国外院校了解申请人的重要依据，美国大学一般要求申请人提供2—3封推荐信。

三、个人(Resume)

个人简历是申请奖学金资助中心不可少的一份材料。申请大学入学及奖学金，要准备一份合适的个人简历。在美国，个人简历就好象是一个人的经历提纲一样，审阅人会根据个人简历及其他材料综合考虑，最后做出决定。嘉华世达留学专家指出，个人简历并不是每个学校每个专业都要求的，但做出一份个人简历，把自己的教育背景、实践经历、校内外兼职经历、课外活动等一目了然地加以呈现，一定会对有好处。

四、个人陈述(personalStatement)

个人陈述是在申请过程中按照学校的要求写一篇有关申请人过去背景，目前成就和未来目标的，一篇成功的个人陈述不但应语言流畅，而且文章逻辑严谨，层次分明，能充分显示申请人的才华并抓住审阅人的注意力。

五、国内学习成绩单及学历证明(OfficialTranscripts)

申请入大学一年级的人，需要提供中学成绩单。申请读大学插班的学生，需要提供中学成绩单及转学前大学成绩单，申请读硕士学位或博士学位的学生，则需提供大学本科的成绩单及以后就读各种学校的成绩单。无论哪种成绩单，都需要由学校管理学生成绩的部门出具并由申请人寄给美国大学。

如高中已，需要提供高中三年的中英文成绩单及毕业证书中英文件，成绩单须为原件，需要用学校的信封封口并加盖学校公章，毕业证书一般为复印件即可。如果申请时，学生为高中在读则需提供高中在读期间每学期的中英文成绩单，及中英文在读证明原件。部分学校还可能会要求提高初中阶段的成绩单。

六、英文考试成绩单(EnglishTestReport)

按照美方学校的要求，申请人应向学校提供官方TOEFL，GRE，GMAT成绩单。一般为TOEFL、IELTS或SAT成绩，需付费ETS积送成绩单原件。有些学校对语言成绩达不到要求或者无语言成绩单学生可以提供有条件录取。

七、存款证明(BankStatement)

一般来说存款证明的金额至少要涵盖第一年的费用，由于各院校及各个专业费用不尽相同，预计约30-50万。除存款证明外一些学校也会要求申请者出具资助人的签名信件或要求资助人填写相关的资助表格来证明资助人有意愿、有能力为申请者提供足够的资金来完成学业。

八、辅助的美国留学申请材料(SupplementaryDocument)

申请艺术类学生需提交作品集;

如实习与所申请专业相关，需提交实习证明;

申请转学分的学生需提交课程大纲，以供校方评估之用。

美国留学申请书范文【篇4】

留随着奖学金申请人数的增加，奖学金增多并不意味着申请人都可以轻易获得，不主动申请，奖学金很少会自己找上门来。要想获得成功，努力提升自己的专业背景，细心把握好申请中的每一个环节尤为重要。

出国专家介绍说，充分的准备美国留学奖学金申请书可以体现在：

全面了解美国大学的录取人数和奖学金发放比例;

在文书写作中有效地挖掘升华自己的优势，在现有基础上加强竞争力;

与教授及导师保持积极到位的沟通，让自己在数以千计的申请者中脱颖而出。

美国留学奖学金申请书合适长度为600~800个英文单词。必须紧扣所要申请的那个专业来写，主线要明确，不要盲目地个性化。让招生者知道你选择该专业的明确和强烈的动机，同时具备充分的条件完成该专业的学习。结构简单，衔接紧密，主线明确，便于理解。许多申请人将简历放在PS中，这会弱化了PS应起的作用。语言表达一定要用地道的英语。

对于美国留学奖学金申请书的写作技巧本文就为大家介绍这些，希望通过本文的介绍，大家都能够写出一份充满信服力的留学奖学金的申请书来。

美国留学申请书范文【篇5】

(一)独特的成长环境

Why: 美国学校很注重多样性(diversity)，所以学校在挑选学生的时候都比较prefer一些有着独特文化背景，教育背景或个人成长背景的学生。例如你来自一些少数民族或者来自一些民族特征比较明显的地区如西北地区等，往往不同地区的人们性格会有或多或少的不一样的，这就要看你自己对于自己的民族或所在地区的深刻理解了。但你不妨问一下自己以下的问题：

1、你觉得你所生长的地区赋予了你哪些独特性?

2、这个地区的人民有哪些显著的特点?

3、为什么你会觉得你生长在这个地区是特别的?

4、你觉得这个地区对于你成长有哪些帮助?

5、你会为自己出生在这个地区而感到自豪吗?为什么?

(二)身边人对你的影响：爸爸?妈妈?老师?或是电影、书上的人物?

Why:除了学术方面，学校都想了解申请人的人生观和价值观，通过学生所崇拜的对象学校可以看出学生对于是与非的分辨。美国留学申请文书这里主要考核的是学生的价值观还有通过对你影响最深的人推断出你以后的成长轨迹。

(三)才艺

Why: 通常美国留学申请文书的Essay题目里面都会有一条是关于课外活动的，主要考核的是学生的各种能力、性格特点等方面。例如你喜欢弹钢琴，不妨问一下自己以下的问题：

1、为什么会学钢琴?

2、你是如何进行你的钢琴练习的?

3、钢琴演奏对于你来说意味着些什么?

4、描述一下你演奏最出色的一次当时的情形?

5、演奏练习辛苦吗?期间是否有一些不寻常的事情发生过?例如挑战?挫折?自己的心得体会又是什么?

6、当你苦练了那么久，最后在过级考委面前真正地弹奏你所熟悉的曲子你的感受是什么?

7、钢琴演奏带给你的乐趣是什么?

(四)志愿者经历

Why: 美国学校看重的并不是你的成绩有多么多么的优秀，你曾经拿过多少奖项，而更多的是看重学生的志愿者经历，而这些恰恰是中国学生所缺失的。不妨问一下自己：

1、曾经做过的志愿者活动是什么?当时的情形是怎样的?

2、描述一个情景，而这个情景是真正能够触动你有想当志愿者的冲动的?

3、志愿者活动对于你来说意味着什么?

(五)学科的选择

Why: 通常申请文书会问你为什么要选择它们的商学院或者为什么要选择金融or经济学，这里主要考核的是学生的academic potential以及make sure学生做出这样的选择并非是盲目的。那你就不妨问一下自己：

1、为什么这个专业?是什么使你有这个想法的?别人的影响?还是你个人的兴趣?

2、选择这个专业对于你来说意味着什么?

3、你未来的职业目标是什么?

4、你对这个专业认识有多少?

(六)学校的选择(why our university)

Why：这个是一个常见的问题，就算学校没有要求申请人写此类的essay,申请人也应该在PS的最后阐明自己选择这所学校的理由。切忌大而空的回答，很多学生都喜欢说因为学校声望高、名气好、地理位置佳等作为自己选择学校的理由，但这只会让学校觉得你是在盲目地选校而不是根据自身的需求出发来选择学校。所以不妨问一下自己：

1、你的职业目标是什么?这个职业目标需要你掌握些什么知识或技能?

2、这所学校的课程设置如何?能否满足你的学习需求和未来职业目标需求?

3、这所学校吸引你的地方在哪里?

总之，美国留学申请文书写作的总原则就是一定要围绕着自己的特点来进行写作和规划，最好出自己在性格方面的优势和特点，同时挖掘素材，不能写成千篇一律的毫无特色的流水账式的申请文书。如果没有认真挖掘出你自身的素材，或者未能彻底对你进行审视，都会导致缺乏个性的大众化。

美国留学申请书范文【篇6】

第一步：列提纲

动笔之前，要给PS列一个大的框架。明确具体要写什么，如何组织素材，如何凸现闪光点。所以，一开始组织整理素材的时候，可以养成随时做笔记的习惯，把突现的灵感，自己的闪光点随时记录下来，最后列成大纲，整理出写作思路，最终形成一个完整的写作提纲。提醒大家需要注意的是，在这个过程中，要注意挖掘自己的闪光点，发现自己的独特之处，由此定下写作主题。

第二步：开头

一定要写一个“龙头”。我们平时阅读文章的时候会注意到，如果一篇文章的开头写的很好的话，我们会很有兴趣往下读，但如果对文章的开头就不感兴趣的话，根本不可能再接着读。一个好的的开头肯定非常吸引人，让人有读下去的欲望。而不是模仿别人的写法，给人毫无新意的感觉，这样不管你后面的内容有多精彩，读者都不会有心情看下去了。因此，开头要与众不同，要精炼，不用太长，要推出主题句，即全文的中心。然后在下文中环环相扣，层层推开，有跌宕起伏，有起承转合。

第三步：主题

文书的主体部分应该是铿锵有力的“金刚身”，有逻辑，有说服力，详略得当，重点突出。当你的文书开了一个好头，吸引人看下去的时候，就是主体部分起作用的时候，读者要通过文书的主体部分来进一步了解你是什么样的人，你具备哪些品质和能力等。主体部分通常包括个人经历、教育背景、工作经历、科研经历等，具体写什么内容，突出哪些部分要依个人情况来定。在写这些经历是，不要平铺直叙，仅仅罗列出你有过什么经历，你的角色和你具体做了什么，更重要的是要展现出你从这些事件或经历中学到了什么，这些经历对你的申请起到什么作用，如何去看待和评价这种经历。

在主体部分，一定要突出自己是个什么样的人，一定要能展现出你的特点、长处、未来的目标、以及它们之间的相关性。但不要一味的夸自己，或写出很狂妄的句子。

第四步：结尾

需要有一个“凤尾”。龙头凤尾，首尾呼应，才算是一篇优秀的文书。文书的结尾应该是一个起到一个总结陈词的作用，呼应全文主题，让文章的主题更加鲜明。提醒大家要注意，文书的结尾要避免简单复述文章内容，应简洁明了，不要过分啰嗦，要有说服力，起到画龙点睛的作用。

『伍』 如何填写Common Application中的Activities List

申请美国搏册大学的本科时，很多学校答此都要求申请人填写活动经历，下面是填写活动的一些建议： Make it easy to understand your activities Most colleges' applications will provide you with a space to describe your activities and estimate the amount of time you spend doing each. Here’s how to do that effectively. 1. Never submit a resume in place of actually listing your activities.If you send a resume without being asked, it’s like telling the college that you didn’t like the way they put the application together. Don’t do it. It’ll just annoy them. 2. List your activities in order of importance to you.Start with the one activity that you could never imagine your high school career without, then work your way down from there. That will help an admissions officer quickly understand what was most important to you, and likely what you spent the most time doing. 3. List only what’s significant.The applicant with the longest list of activities is not necessarily the one who’清银迅s going to get in. Admissions officers want to learn about the significant ways you spent your time outside of class. If you were in the Spanish Club in ninth grade and never went back after ninth grade, it won’t really help your application to list it. Leave the space blank, or use the spot to share something else more important to you. Remember: this isn’t a contest to see how much you can list. It’s your chance to describe what you really enjoyed doing in high school. 4. Spell out (most) abbreviations/acronyms.It would be hard to find someone who doesn’t know what an MVP is, but there are lots of other abbreviations that only mean something to the people involved in the group that uses it. Would your aunt who doesn’t work at your high school know it? If not, write it out on your application. 5. Be accurate with your “approximate time spent.”Many colleges will ask you to estimate the number of weeks per year, and number of hours per week, that you spend participating in each activity. Be as accurate as you can. Colleges aren’t paying close enough attention that they’ll question if two hours a week in the Spanish Club should more accurately be one hour. But if you tell them your involvement in the Spanish Club is 30 hours per week, that doesn’t add up (unless Spanish Club has become your full-time job). Don’t underestimate, either. If you say you play football six hours a week, that’s probably selling yourself short considering that one game alone is at least three hours. Again, just be as accurate as you can. Also, some students who are very involved in an activity automatically enter “52 weeks per year.” But you should only do that if you are honestly swimming in the pool or working at the hamburger stand or running the Key Club every single week of the year (including winter holiday, spring break and summer months). There’s no need to exaggerate here, and no reason to give an admissions officer pause. 希望对大家有所帮助！

『陆』 美国留学Essay申请英文范文

美国芝加哥凯信判大学历年来是留学申请竞争最激烈的美国大学之一。芝加哥大学申请Essay怎么写?下面我坦慧为大家提供一个范本，以供参考。 University of Chicago芝加哥大学Essay范文 "Beyond Dictionary Definitions of leadership"

作者 Victoria Tomaka

"All I know about leadership I learned from . . ." What items could a person use to describe leadership qualities?

盯改Inspired by the student council advisors at my high school.

Student council was a big part of my life in high school. I have participated in it since my frst year of high school. When I frst joined, I was quiet, na?ve, and unwilling to participate in many activities. I was scared to meet new people and afraid to apply myself. This all began to change. Half way through my frst year in student council, one of the advisors can up to me and asked why I did not participate that much. I did not have an answer for her and did not know how to respond. After this, I began to think of an answer. I became frustrated and decided to change. I started to show up at events and had a great time. I realized I loved this and wanted to start leading these activities. In my sophomore, junior, and now my senior year of high school, I asserted myself and took on a strong leadership role in student council. I did not fgure out the answer to why I was so reserved until this year with the help of this question.

When I looked up leadership in the dictionary, it said that it was the capacity to lead and the act or instance of leading. These are two very broad defnitions of leadership. Many people have different notions of what this word actually means. When I was challenged to use different items to describe what leadership actually is, I thought this was going to be a hard and obnoxious task. What could I learn from comparing leadership to a stuffed animal or a rubber chicken? But when I sat down to come up with a couple of answers, I realized that leadership could be compared to almost anything a person wants.

All I know about leadership I learned from a calculator. A calculator can add everything together to come up with the best answer. It can delet e what is unnecessary and only include what is important. It can solve any type of problem. These are all important equalities a leader has to have. A leader has to be able to add all of the ideas together to make the best possible plan. Leaders have to know how to decipher the good and the bad out of an idea. They have to be versatile and know how to deal with different types of issues.

All I know about leadership I learned from a ball. A ball is able to bounce back up after it is dropped. It is round and has no creases. A ball can be thrown back and forth to different people. All of these qualities are also leadership qualities. A leader has to be ready for every situation that is thrown at him or her. He or she has to be able to bounce back from any setbacks and never dwell on the past. Leaders have to exhibit many qualities and never be closed-minded about a situation. A leader must be able to delegate when he or she cannot get the work done. They have to trust everyone they lead to be able to "catch the ball" and keep a project rolling.

This activity made me realize that being a leader is so much more than just having authority and having the ability to take control of a situation. A leader has to be trusting of all the people he or she leads and, leaders must be able to combine ideas into one encompassing idea. They cannot sit in the background and watch events happen; they have to jump in and be involved. They should not delegate all their responsibilities away.

Leadership is more than what the dictionary says it is.

I learned through all of this that I have many of these qualities.

I have the ability to solve problems, lead through adversity, and be versatile. From answering this question, I realized that I could lead effectively, even if my leadership style is different from other indivials. When I joined student council in my frst year of high school, I did not have these qualities because I was never put into a situation where I had to lead. I was too reserved to try. When I tried, I learned that I could succeed in this. I did not realize until I answered this question about leadership. I was never able to see that being a leader is not just about taking control of a group and telling everyone what to do.www.liuxue.la When I was a freshman, I thought leadership was this. I did not know that did not have to be forceful and strict. I stereotyped a leader then. Thisis where I went wrong. A leader is about being yourself and never letting anyone change you. I thought I had to change to be a good leaderOnly when I expanded my comfort zone did I realize this was not trueIt only took three years and a silly question/game to fgure this out.

以上就是美国大学申请的Essay范文，希望能为您提供参考。

『柒』 申请美国大学所需要的activity resume（详情看补充）

这个问题确实为难，我们的答案是根据美国大学录取办公室的招生情况而来的。
很难说某一个地方的某一种活动是大学看的比较重的。请注意美国人的思维和我们不一样，他们的标准没有特定的条件（你说的那种），范围都比较大，这些活动只要表现了自身良好的品质，都可以为学生加分。
所以你应该考虑做一些和当地特色、中国情况有关的活动，他们对于distinction比较看重。所以，对于申请材料的活动，我只能回答到这个程度，再详细点那就只能胡说八道了。

『捌』 美国大学申请，个子资料填写问题请教

我也在准备申请出国，说说我的看法。
1. 你有什么有关你的成绩的因素想说，这个一般都是对gpa不高的人来说的，给你机会找些借口。
2. 还是让你找借口，可以说一些人际关系方面的话题，甚至可以说失恋。
3. 就算普通，你宏慧祥也要说。这是整个ps最重要的一个问题，因为它其实只在问“你有什么过人之处，来吸碧昌引他们录取你？”如果你实在找不到特别的，就写一些有关你的专业的东西。
4. passionate, sincere, persistent(这个比较重要，因为美国的graate school都希望你呆在他们学校做一辈子学问...）
5. 语言...可能吧...
6. 可以说培养了你的做慈善 做公益的意识，知道了帮助别人的重要性和快乐，这个社会需要...说点空话就好
7. 这个问题其实也非常重要，因为是在问你的背景，同样可以显示出你的与众不同，由于我不太了解你的专蔽搏业，也不好随便乱说。
最后祝你成功！

『玖』 关于美国大学申请书上我有一栏不会填,知道的朋友帮个忙~谢谢!`

申请书上有一栏"summer activities
"暑期老含笑活动
然后旁边分别列出
"Activity(camp,travel,summer school)
"活动(夏令营,旅行,暑期班)---就是把你暑期做什么事列出来.

"Approximate dates"老谨
大概日期
"Number of hours spent per week (if applicable)"
每周活动多少侍含个小时(如果有活动的话)

『拾』 求美国本科申请成功案例，activity活动+Honor获奖+PS文书！

其实这个在各大留学网站可以找得到，但是都不是详细的介绍，只有录取通知书，所以信息利用率不是很高，你可以选择听讲座，尤其是美国导师过来分享成功案例的，有一些导师还是很不错的。